Comments on: Tearful Attachment…

By: mahendrap

mahendrap — Sat, 27 Oct 2007 15:46:25 +0000

bbZuSh, VBR, Arun: Thank you!

Sunil: That was beautiful too. Thanks for sharing!

Ashok, Rambodoc: I can count on you to bring hilarity in the most absurd and creative ways! No offense…:-)

Sowmya: Sure, feel free. Thanks for appreciating!

By: sowmya

sowmya — Sat, 27 Oct 2007 05:47:49 +0000

Touchy one! May I use this poem — in the poem corner of my blog>?

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WATER SPORTS IN BALI « A Twist of Word and Mind — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 01:49:49 +0000

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By: rambodoc

rambodoc — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 00:16:45 +0000

Very good, Ashok. Try this:

“If I were a tear in your panteyes
I would lie on your cheeks and die on your hips;
But if you were a tyre in my belleye
I’d never starve in fear of losing you.”

Sorry, Mahendra. Delete if you feel offended.

By: krishashok

krishashok — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 22:07:39 +0000

Nice. Some absurd possibilities though

1) Eye-Damage
If I were a tear in your eyes
you should go meet an opthalmologist
If you were a tear in my eyes
I will sue the hell out of you

2) Slippery
If I were a tyre in your ice
I would pray to lady friction to save me
If you were a tyre in my ice
I hope your brakes work well for you

By: Arunk

Arunk — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 17:09:51 +0000

beautiful!

By: Voracious Blog Reader

Voracious Blog Reader — Wed, 24 Oct 2007 21:15:03 +0000

Very very beautiful.

Voracious Blog Reader

By: Sunil

Sunil — Tue, 23 Oct 2007 14:54:57 +0000

Very nice.
Reminded me of a another one on tear -
“Aankh mein jo aasoon hain, aasoon hain,
Kaun iska Saani hain,
Ruk gayaa to Moti hain, moti hain,
Bah gayaan to paani hain.”

By: bbZuSh

bbZuSh — Tue, 23 Oct 2007 09:46:09 +0000

That’s really beautiful…