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Mahendra Palsule
If I were a tear in your eyes
I would lie on your cheeks and die on your lips
But if you were a tear in my eyes
I would never cry in fear of losing you
(Composed by a friend)
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That’s really beautiful…
Very nice.
Reminded me of a another one on tear -
“Aankh mein jo aasoon hain, aasoon hain,
Kaun iska Saani hain,
Ruk gayaa to Moti hain, moti hain,
Bah gayaan to paani hain.”
Very very beautiful.
Voracious Blog Reader
beautiful!
Nice. Some absurd possibilities though
1) Eye-Damage
If I were a tear in your eyes
you should go meet an opthalmologist
If you were a tear in my eyes
I will sue the hell out of you
2) Slippery
If I were a tyre in your ice
I would pray to lady friction to save me
If you were a tyre in my ice
I hope your brakes work well for you
Very good, Ashok. Try this:
“If I were a tear in your panteyes
I would lie on your cheeks and die on your hips;
But if you were a tyre in my belleye
I’d never starve in fear of losing you.”
Sorry, Mahendra. Delete if you feel offended.
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Touchy one! May I use this poem – in the poem corner of my blog>?
bbZuSh, VBR, Arun: Thank you!
Sunil: That was beautiful too. Thanks for sharing!
Ashok, Rambodoc: I can count on you to bring hilarity in the most absurd and creative ways! No offense…:-)
Sowmya: Sure, feel free. Thanks for appreciating!