• That’s real­ly beau­ti­ful…

  • Sunil

    Very nice.
    Remind­ed me of a anoth­er one on tear -
    “Aankh mein jo aasoon hain, aasoon hain,
    Kaun iska Saani hain,
    Ruk gayaa to Moti hain, moti hain,
    Bah gayaan to paani hain.”

  • Very very beau­ti­ful.

    Vora­cious Blog Read­er

  • beau­ti­ful!

  • Nice. Some absurd pos­si­bil­i­ties though

    1) Eye-Dam­age
    If I were a tear in your eyes
    you should go meet an opthal­mol­o­gist
    If you were a tear in my eyes
    I will sue the hell out of you

    2) Slip­pery
    If I were a tyre in your ice
    I would pray to lady fric­tion to save me
    If you were a tyre in my ice
    I hope your brakes work well for you

  • Very good, Ashok. Try this:

    If I were a tear in your panteyes
    I would lie on your cheeks and die on your hips;
    But if you were a tyre in my bell­eye
    I’d nev­er starve in fear of los­ing you.”

    Sor­ry, Mahen­dra. Delete if you feel offend­ed.

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  • Touchy one! May I use this poem — in the poem cor­ner of my blog>?

  • bbZuSh, VBR, Arun: Thank you!

    Sunil: That was beau­ti­ful too. Thanks for shar­ing!

    Ashok, Ram­bodoc: I can count on you to bring hilar­i­ty in the most absurd and cre­ative ways! No offense…:-)

    Sowmya: Sure, feel free. Thanks for appre­ci­at­ing!