An Unquiet Mind

9 Comments

• bbZuSh wrote:

  Oct 23, 2007 at 3:16 PM

  That’s really beautiful…
• Sunil wrote:

  Oct 23, 2007 at 8:24 PM

  Very nice.
  Reminded me of a another one on tear -
  “Aankh mein jo aasoon hain, aasoon hain,
  Kaun iska Saani hain,
  Ruk gayaa to Moti hain, moti hain,
  Bah gayaan to paani hain.”
• Voracious Blog Reader wrote:

  Oct 25, 2007 at 2:45 AM

  Very very beautiful.

  Vora­cious Blog Reader
• Arunk wrote:

  Oct 25, 2007 at 10:39 PM

  beau­ti­ful!
• krishashok wrote:

  Oct 26, 2007 at 3:37 AM

  Nice. Some absurd pos­si­bil­i­ties though

  1) Eye-Damage
  If I were a tear in your eyes
  you should go meet an opthal­mol­o­gist
  If you were a tear in my eyes
  I will sue the hell out of you

  2) Slip­pery
  If I were a tyre in your ice
  I would pray to lady fric­tion to save me
  If you were a tyre in my ice
  I hope your brakes work well for you
• rambodoc wrote:

  Oct 26, 2007 at 5:46 AM

  Very good, Ashok. Try this:

  “If I were a tear in your panteyes
  I would lie on your cheeks and die on your hips;
  But if you were a tyre in my bell­eye
  I’d never starve in fear of los­ing you.”

  Sorry, Mahen­dra. Delete if you feel offended.
• WATER SPORTS IN BALI « A Twist of Word and Mind wrote:

  Oct 26, 2007 at 7:19 AM

  […] let me tell you about eyes. A sen­si­tive sod like Mahen­dra has expressed some thoughts on them. If you are one of the lazy, deca­dent sort who, when pro­vided every modern […]
• sowmya wrote:

  Oct 27, 2007 at 11:17 AM

  Touchy one! May I use this poem — in the poem cor­ner of my blog>?
• mahendrap wrote:

  Oct 27, 2007 at 9:16 PM

  bbZuSh, VBR, Arun: Thank you!

  Sunil: That was beau­ti­ful too. Thanks for sharing!

  Ashok, Ram­bodoc: I can count on you to bring hilar­ity in the most absurd and cre­ative ways! No offense…:-)

  Sowmya: Sure, feel free. Thanks for appreciating!